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I hope that snake gets tired before you do.

Your poem made me smile, then wince. It feels so physical that I could almost hear it breathing. Wishing you gentler days ahead—and perhaps one morning when the loudest thing inside you is birdsong instead.

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Birdsong wishes in full voice!

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